News ENTRIES(2)
1) India main capital, Mumbai has been targeted by terrorist. There are 100 people dead and 30 injured. A terrorist had suddenly went into a crowd and shoot at the by-standers.
Opinions: I think that Mumbai's government did not do his job and did not notice that the terrorist had invade Mumbai. Being a government, i think that the government has the responsibility to protect his own country and could manage the country. If the government notice any suspicious people turned up at the country, he should take immediate action and investigate it.
2) Thailand PAD Protester have taken over second airport. Tourists have been trapped in there and could not get out of the airport and have to stay in the airport all the time. The PAD Protester said that this was done to prevent Minister to fly over to Northern city of Changmai to meet with other Prime Minister.
Opinions: I think what the protester had done is wrong. All the people trapped inside the airport must have feel sad as they could not go anywhere and had nothing to eat except for some tidbits,etc but not rice. The tourists are innocent and should not suffered this kind of treatment. This problem also affect Singaporeans as the Singapore airport do not allow Singaporeans to fly over to Vietnam, some of this affected people could not go back to Vietnam to meet their family and some have to cancel their holiday plan.
Opinions: I think that Mumbai's government did not do his job and did not notice that the terrorist had invade Mumbai. Being a government, i think that the government has the responsibility to protect his own country and could manage the country. If the government notice any suspicious people turned up at the country, he should take immediate action and investigate it.
2) Thailand PAD Protester have taken over second airport. Tourists have been trapped in there and could not get out of the airport and have to stay in the airport all the time. The PAD Protester said that this was done to prevent Minister to fly over to Northern city of Changmai to meet with other Prime Minister.
Opinions: I think what the protester had done is wrong. All the people trapped inside the airport must have feel sad as they could not go anywhere and had nothing to eat except for some tidbits,etc but not rice. The tourists are innocent and should not suffered this kind of treatment. This problem also affect Singaporeans as the Singapore airport do not allow Singaporeans to fly over to Vietnam, some of this affected people could not go back to Vietnam to meet their family and some have to cancel their holiday plan.
posted by Andy.L @ 3:21 AM
2 Comments:
At November 30, 2008 at 5:04 AM ,
YHLin said...
Andy,
1) The terrorists would definitely not let the government identify them. In addition, you should write the government should check Mumbai very thoroughly in search of the hostage held by the terrorists so as to stop more deaths. You should also write about the first Singaporean dead in the hands of the terrorists and express your condolences. Also, you should also think about how Mumbai will be affected after the terrorist attack and what should the government do in order to prevent such things to occur again(e.g. strengthen the police force, search more thoroughly in airport, etc.)
2) Your opinions of the second news is better. Think about how Thailand will be affected and try to suggest what the protesters should do instead of using violence. In addition, you should write about the bad things of protesting(like more casualties and people being injured, might affect children whose parents are involved in the protest, etc.)
:D
-Hwee Lin-
At December 9, 2008 at 10:45 PM ,
tsooc said...
Dear Andy,
Great effort. You are certainly improving. Keep it up.
1) Agree with Hlin. She gave sound comments. In addition, you can also comment on the commendable efforts of the hotel staff in keeping the guests safe.
2) For this piece of news, there was actually no violence in Thailand. The people protested but did not use violence. Thus the tourists here were just stranded but not in immediate danger unless the situation changes.
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